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PLAY ME?
Contributed by
emystar
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Monday, 29th October 2007 @ 03:39:27 AM in AEST
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I'm flesh-n-bone like you
If ya can't take, go on thru
Find anotha fool in games
No go knocckin on my window panes.
Honey, don't even try ta play me
Flipfloppin 'round, ya want win
Been played by very best
Ain't no time fo yoingnorent test.
Don't make me out fo games
Spent my time, brain unsane.
Ain't tryin to prove to you
Ain't no time fo the likes of you.
Ya gotta show me, don't tell
Can make ya walk backwards, hell yea
Life is awesomely precious, you bet.
That's one thing you seem to foget
You really ain't peddlin luv
Shore as there's skyes above
Bull **** flys on down road
Take anotha look, ain't no toad..
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emystar
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Re: PLAY ME?
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by deadheadpoet on
Monday, 29th October 2007 @ 09:14:45 AM AEST
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Aaaahh Tell it Tell it, sister. This is one fired up write, your language usage was rolling off my tongue. Hee Hee. Good one.
Peace and hugs,
Laura |
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Re: PLAY ME?
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by Crow on
Monday, 29th October 2007 @ 12:09:47 PM AEST
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| ooh! this will make someone take a breath, before they leap" lol! good write. Vincent |
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Re: PLAY ME?
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by Former_Member on
Wednesday, 31st October 2007 @ 12:32:31 AM AEST
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Omigosh!! Em ..YYYYYYYYYYYY!! lol
Wow! I can feel so much conviction and anger in this. Something
we don't see very often from you. I love how you just let
the emotion guide the write. It is so real and raw!!
Bravo poet! Bravo!!
~Breezy |
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Re: PLAY ME?
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by Former_Member on
Sunday, 11th November 2007 @ 05:19:46 AM AEST
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| This is a great poem. Excellent work!! |
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Re: PLAY ME?
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by gribbs on
Monday, 12th November 2007 @ 01:00:20 AM AEST
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| very uniquely worded...a person with a strong constitution... |
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Re: PLAY ME?
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by BOZEEN on
Monday, 12th November 2007 @ 06:25:28 AM AEST
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| THAT WAS GREAT I LIKE HOW YOU JUST TOLD THEM OFF IN SPADES,TO THE POINT. GO GIRL |
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Re: PLAY ME?
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by kaycas on
Saturday, 12th January 2008 @ 02:48:11 AM AEST
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Being new to the site, when I first commented on one of your works I said I felt like singing to it, I did not realise you wrote lyrics. Again I just feel like singing to these words. You are very talented. Are your words from life experiences or purely what you think to write about?
Kay |
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