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in every stone
Contributed by
ladyfawn
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Sunday, 28th October 2007 @ 06:12:49 AM in AEST
Topic:
Lifepoems
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in every colour is a light
in every soul some laughter
in every eye there lives a tear
~*~
in every cloud a raging storm
in every dog some bark n' woof
in every silence there be noise
~*~
in every dream lucid cognition
in every murderous plan a flaw
in every kindness a universe touched
~*~
in every heart there lives some pain
in every coin unanswered wishes
in every thought an evanescent truth
~*~
in every potential brilliance; a pause
in every star, there resides a dream
every list goes on it seems; for
~*~
every eye holds within a tear
every soul; remembrance of laughter
in every stone a crystal.
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Re: in every stone
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by Former_Member on
Sunday, 28th October 2007 @ 07:31:52 AM AEST
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u 4got one, in every poem written by Lady Fawn there is true unadulterated beauty
that never stops enchanting the reader,
at least not this reader any way . . .
((((Nessa))))
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Re: in every stone
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by law_glen18 on
Sunday, 28th October 2007 @ 10:05:27 AM AEST
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| Wonderfully written!!! |
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Re: in every stone
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by Angelic_Demon on
Sunday, 28th October 2007 @ 10:37:22 AM AEST
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I think I've read this on your computer before. Hehe *is bad and sneaks into your documents sometimes*
Either way it's beautiful, Mom. |
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Re: in every stone
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by His_Infernal_Majesty on
Sunday, 28th October 2007 @ 10:44:12 AM AEST
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Nice poem, embodying the epitomy of all life. The fact that in every mental and physical experience, good or bad there is the opportunity for change, for better or worst. Nothing in life is consistant except change. Great Poem. My interpretation of it is probably well off what you were thinking. But this is the level I can see your poem achieving, nice job.
Rich |
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Re: in every stone
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by Former_Member on
Sunday, 28th October 2007 @ 11:41:16 AM AEST
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nessa, my dear friend, this was exceptionally profound
and so touchingly gorgeous! I adore the thoughts you
plucked, seemingly from mid-air and placed them inside
your words for us all to ponder. So much truth here.
With every write of yours I read, I feel more at peace,
more at one with all, and more in love with life.
You are beautiful ~
*hugs*
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Re: in every stone
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by deadheadpoet on
Sunday, 28th October 2007 @ 02:17:25 PM AEST
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...and in every poem you write there is wisdom and brilliance, light and love....beautiful, my dear Nessa. So many wonderful thoughts spilled out and flowing together in harmony. Very nice. Thanks for sharing.
Much peace, love and hugs,
Laura |
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Re: in every stone
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by needledancing on
Sunday, 28th October 2007 @ 02:41:17 PM AEST
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and in every moment a truth...like this.
true and touching all hearts.
open your hearts and ears and here is the music. Well sung my poet friend...well sung. |
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Re: in every stone
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by shelby on
Sunday, 28th October 2007 @ 05:22:16 PM AEST
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And...... in Nessa there is a heart that flows with love endless as the rivers..
Graced with talent that overflows in abundance........
Lovely write.......
Iv so missed you
hugs
Michelle |
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Re: in every stone
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by Dom on
Sunday, 28th October 2007 @ 11:41:08 PM AEST
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Dear Nessa, such a wonderful read. You are so in touch with the beauty and hope in life and nature that it isn't possible to come away feeling anything less than inspired and optimistic.
Take care,
Dom |
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Re: in every stone
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by emystar on
Monday, 29th October 2007 @ 06:27:11 AM AEST
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Awesome write, girlfriend.
Very thought provoking and true.
huggs,
emy |
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Re: in every stone
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by windowguy on
Saturday, 1st May 2010 @ 09:31:16 AM AEST
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| This is a classic! Reads like wise words written by a sage. Enjoyed it. |
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Re: in every stone
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by hauntedscorp on
Wednesday, 28th May 2014 @ 09:11:40 PM AEST
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I enjoy life musing like this. The yin and yang of things, or cause and effect, if you will. I find it endlessly fascinating that for *every* action there is an equal and powerful reaction.
Nice post, I enjoyed this read!
~Scorp |
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Re: in every stone
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by colinb on
Saturday, 5th July 2014 @ 04:38:00 PM AEST
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| your words are profound |
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