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''what i think of u''
Contributed by
Hmiller
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Sunday, 28th October 2007 @ 06:01:20 AM in AEST
Topic:
LostLove
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When I think of you
I think "why"
Why did you go and burn our love?
Did you think it was a game?
Used to when our eyes met
I could help but smile
Now that I saw you with that other girl
My heart is full of haterd.
That what I think of you.
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Hmiller
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2007-10-28 06:01:20]
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Re: ''what i think of u''
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by law_glen18 on
Sunday, 28th October 2007 @ 10:07:34 AM AEST
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| It is always hard losing love but there is a light in every darkness, just look and you shall find. Nice poem! |
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Re: ''what i think of u''
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by His_Infernal_Majesty on
Sunday, 28th October 2007 @ 11:03:12 AM AEST
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Speaking in terms of the poem, I think it could maybe do with some work, but at the same time I can feel your pain. Maybe its because i've been there myself, and I can completely relate. At the end of the day, people arn't always meant to be as much as one partner may want them to be, one person can't love enough for the two in a healthy relationship, it takes two to tango. At the same time if to this person your love was a 'game' then clearly he doesn't repect you (maybe all presepective partners) enough to be in a healthy relationship with you, then feel fortunate that you escaped, with an opportunity to restart with someone who can love you for yourself, don't look past people you normally would, not to sound too cliched but love truely is blind and in order to find the right person you may have to find the partner for you you may have to kiss alot of frogs. Try not to hate the betrayer to much, I assume from your use of short hand language that you are a person of youth, so take it from me your from an age which commitment, responciblity, and relationship scare people. You should try looking at a few prospects, don't instantly convice yourself that your in love with someone, as thats surely a risk of great proportion, spread your bets out. Also don't fall into the trap I did as a teen after I lost the girl I thought to be the love of my life, the term love to me started being used to loosely, because many people love the feeling of being in love more than the meaning and reposciblity it entails. Good Luck You won't be down forever =)
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