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My heart is as black as coal
Contributed by
randyjohnson
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Sunday, 28th October 2007 @ 12:24:02 AM in AEST
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As each day passes, life can really take its toll.
The bitterness and anger have made my heart as black as coal.
Some people are happy but that's something I'll never be.
Life is hard and over the years it has gotten to me.
If I said that I'm a people person, I'd be telling a lie.
Most people have treated me like crap and I don't understand why.
I'll most likely never have a wife and kids, my life will never be whole.
The years of pain and anger have made my heart as black as coal.
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Re: My heart is as black as coal
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by His_Infernal_Majesty on
Sunday, 28th October 2007 @ 11:31:39 AM AEST
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What can I say, you admit yourself your not a people person. Being bitter and angry isn't gonna change anything. It's easy to sit somewhere and complain life is not fair, or to blame God or people who treat you how they do and say things like your life will never be whole. It's damn easy I used to do it, and think that it was everyone else fault for making me the bitter person I am, maybe its just my nature, to be pestimistic as maybe it is yours, but at the end of the day life is in your hands. It's no one else fault if your life suxs other than yours. Take people who grown up in countries without enough food to eat, are they doomed to have sucky live's? No is the answer because they can choose to live there lives to the best of their ability and if they are doing that they are making the choice to live, whereas your choosing to surrender, if thats the way you want to live, you might deserve nothing. Make the transition, be positive and life will be alot better. Who's going to love you if you don't love yourself? Good Luck with the Change.
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Re: My heart is as black as coal
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by SuicidalSon on
Sunday, 28th October 2007 @ 11:41:59 AM AEST
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| I feel you on that one bud |
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Re: My heart is as black as coal
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by -Nik-91- on
Monday, 29th October 2007 @ 05:33:44 AM AEST
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| i love your poem its really heart felt i feel your pain keep writting xxxx |
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Re: My heart is as black as coal
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by Former_Member on
Monday, 12th November 2007 @ 01:54:56 PM AEST
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I can definitely relate to this. I have been emotionally abused yet instead of my heart shrivelling, it swelled how i envy your black heart!
Great write!! |
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