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My Last Goodbye
Contributed by
law_glen18
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Saturday, 27th October 2007 @ 09:52:55 AM in AEST
Topic:
Suicide
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I’ve tried to list all the reasons why
I should live and should not die
Will there be someone waiting for me
Or am I still all alone desperate to be free
My friends have all turned and gone
I pushed them away all along
So when I need a caring hand
I’m all alone suffering again
My girl has gone with some random guys
I’m left to myself and to myself I lie
I say shes beside me holding me tight
But I’m crying to my pillow every night
I don’t feel wanted I feel alone
Nowhere to go but this depressive home
No-one to talk to I never go out
I live for reasons I know nothing about
I need Steph badly to be right here
But shes off over country getting smothered in beer
So when I turn around crying so bad
There is no-one who cares that I’m terribly sad
So maybe its time that I got the hint
This isn’t my life just a nightmare stint
If I ran forever I would finally die
Why not sooner, This is my last goodbye
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law_glen18
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2007-10-27 09:52:55]
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Re: My Last Goodbye
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by His_Infernal_Majesty on
Saturday, 27th October 2007 @ 11:50:01 AM AEST
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I said my last goodbye along time ago,
my teenage life has had nothing to show;
but misery and tears, Just like yours,
cold and alone knocking at heavens doors.
But keep on fighting, keep hold on,
never surrender, and you'll be number one,
maybe not to whom you thought,
but at least it will be for you and not love that you've bought.
Chin up your not alone. Rich |
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Re: My Last Goodbye
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by Voice of the Silent on
Sunday, 28th October 2007 @ 02:37:09 PM AEST
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This writting is very deep, but there is always a reason to live and go on and there is someone who at least cares about you so you should never say goodbye because there will be that one reason to stay.
Trust me when i say that i've tried many times |
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Re: My Last Goodbye
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by Music on
Sunday, 28th October 2007 @ 03:44:57 PM AEST
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| If you say good bye now your taking the easy way out it's much hard to stay and to strugle and to work to be happy no one said life was going to be easy love the poem was very deep. But I try saying good bye too one time but relize I was going to stay and fight and work to be happy intel one day its not any work at all. Love your gutts Music |
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Re: My Last Goodbye
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by -Nik-91- on
Monday, 29th October 2007 @ 05:45:32 AM AEST
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| wow i love your poem its really good and heart felt |
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