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Learning to Breath

Contributed by rhei76 on Saturday, 27th October 2007 @ 06:08:18 AM in AEST
Topic: Lifepoems

It is gone, All the fight is done
There's nothing left for you
You now become no one-------To me

No more compromise, No more will I submit
There's nothing left for you
You were never the one-------For me

You killed it, All my love for you
There is none left for you
And now I can start to-------Breath

Breath in the air, believe in the light
The sweet aroma, The beautiful stars
That come out at night--------To see

There is more and more you never were
Just a lost cause bringing me down
But now I can start again-------For me

Through all the pain you gave me
You taught me I deserve
One that will help me------Breath

Breath in the air, Believe in the light
The sweet aroma of her hair
I smell at night-------I mean

We are done, My love is gone
There is none left of you
And now I've started to-------Breath

Copyright © rhei76 ... [ 2007-10-27 06:08:18]
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Re: Learning to Breath (User Rating: 1 )
by law_glen18 on Saturday, 27th October 2007 @ 11:47:04 AM AEST
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Being stuck in a failing relationship can be more hard and painful that being struck with a bullet, as shown in this magnificent piece of writing, nice one!!

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