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How Sweet The Sound
Contributed by
honey56
on
Friday, 26th October 2007 @ 10:55:26 AM in AEST
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oops
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I heard a voice singing
Singing..
So gently it rode upon the
Wind..
So sweet the voice sound
Upon the wind it rode..
It touched my lips as the
Wind blew by...
It smelled of cotton candy
As it slowly filled the air
I felt the wind caress my
Soul..
How strange this all sound
But, yet it held my heart
Within it’s grasp..
I heard a voice singing
Singing..
So gently it rode upon the
Wind..
Ah, ah how sweet the voice
Sound..
It held my heart capture
Amidst the wind..
Hello!
How sweet the voice sound...
Copyright ©
honey56
... [
2007-10-26 10:55:26]
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Re: How Sweet The Sound
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by shelby on
Friday, 26th October 2007 @ 10:58:19 AM AEST
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I also heard a poets voice singing and how lovely the tune....... I loved the wind and the softness of this. Leaving me with a great sense of ease. Lovelyyyyyyyy
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Re: How Sweet The Sound
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by Dom on
Saturday, 27th October 2007 @ 04:09:18 AM AEST
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I loved the descriptions in this, 'it smelled of cotton candy' and the use of repetition.
Lovely melodic write with all the sweetness of that breeze.
Take care,
Dom |
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