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I Dont Date Outside My Race (Spoken Word)
Contributed by
allidoiswrite82
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Friday, 26th October 2007 @ 10:00:18 AM in AEST
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She told me she had a way with words
and I assumed from our phone conversations
that she had luscious curves
I mean she said she was, 5 foot 2
eyes light blue
a little weight in all the right places
but she said I'll leave that to you
brown sandy hair
that, goes down to there
with soft beautiful skin
that, hypnotized men
and forced eyes to stare.
Though I try not to be superficial
to date a young women who is super official
is something that I could certainly get into
I mean this was way before I evaluated her mental
About me she just wanted to keep it simple
just my name " Yes I write and have two cute dimples"
and so that one drop rippled
until the wave grew as tall as Pharaoh's temple
but with only so much love that can cross these phone wires
I wanted her to be my queen, let folks address the sires
its hers my cars, money and palace
drop everything i know and skip a red eye to Dallas
only to see the disappointment in her face
"I Don't Date Outside My Race"
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2007-10-26 10:00:18]
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Re: I Dont Date Outside My Race (Spoken Word)
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by deadheadpoet on
Friday, 26th October 2007 @ 12:34:07 PM AEST
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So Sorry. OMFG that is unbelievable. Too bad you had to find out the hard way she was a racist and a small minded human. Wonderful write. I really am sorry you went through this, but it looks like to me, you deserve someone much better than her. Keep looking, my brother, keep looking. Not everyone is a petty idiot.
Best of luck to you.
Peace,
Laura |
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Re: I Dont Date Outside My Race (Spoken Word)
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by Honey56 on
Saturday, 27th October 2007 @ 02:27:58 AM AEST
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A beautiful write came out of your disappointment..But you will find your true soulmate..
Blessinga... |
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