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torn
Contributed by
katiew629
on
Wednesday, 5th March 2003 @ 11:40:00 PM in AEST
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Is life so precious to endure such pain as this?
can I do what you ask of me?
The squeeze of my finger could eleviate your suffering.
yet rob you of what little you have left.
It crushes my soul to witness this agony
knowing I have the power to end it.
Yet my selfish needs stop me, would I ever be the same again?
I will miss you so... left alone in this world.
Does life end here?
This could be but one stage in existence.
If only I knew for sure. My decision would have been made.
You plead with me, your blood spilled on the ground.
This one last request you ask
I can't do it.... I can't do it.
Is my indicision caused by compation or weakness?
I'm torn
Who am I to take a life?
Even one at death's door.
I'm sorry my friend, to fail you here
I can't take your life in my hands
I will lie with you until it ends
Do you have any idea that you are killing me inside?
Of course you do, you just always run and hide...
Hide from your problems...
Hide from your fears....
have a smoke and drink some more beers.
Don't tell me you love me, because you do NOT
You know you hurt me, you know i cry a lot!
I would die for you, why can't you see?
All I ask is just please....love me.
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Re: torn
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by twinkletoes on
Wednesday, 5th March 2003 @ 11:59:20 PM AEST
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| I like this as it shows you can take yourself from your mind and not only emplant yourself into another person, but be them. I like it :) |
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Re: torn
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by Archie on
Saturday, 8th May 2004 @ 12:03:54 PM AEST
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| A great show of empathy |
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