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Capable of Catharsis
Contributed by
mangos
on
Wednesday, 24th October 2007 @ 10:05:09 AM in AEST
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I am me
a valid point
eloquently phrased
over extended
underpaid
come and get it
before it runs away
simple, yet prolific
intricate in design
complexity entwined
the fabric of faces
combine
flashes of an oasis
picture this
before it disappears
before we are left behind
alert the alarmed
insert an original psalm
A dead poets arm
bleeds to his fingers
drips to her empty paper
soaks through their sunshine
before its gone
Was it ever mine?
The annoying librarian ask us to refrain
I beg you-
Talk to me until its hurts deep in the brain
Until the night and day look strikingly the same
Make the stars and moon dance all over again
I miss you friend
I am entirely under your command
hypnotic plan
crystal sand
cast a spell
with lovely words
pretty colored birds
sunsets in turn
before it vanishes
before it never returns
your faint voice is still heard
among the many echoes bouncing off the wall
__________
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Copyright ©
mangos
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2007-10-24 10:05:09]
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Re: Capable of Catharsis
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by Fionndruinne on
Wednesday, 24th October 2007 @ 11:50:42 AM AEST
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The somewhat abstract voice here comes to a powerful and emotive head in several of the lines. This is one of those poems which comes straight from human experience; not some aspect or another of it, but the whole gamut. Good work.
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Re: Capable of Catharsis
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by Silent-No-More on
Wednesday, 24th October 2007 @ 12:19:03 PM AEST
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I'd love to hear this. It's cadence suggests that it wants to be spoken. Spoken.... with passion. There's something quite alive about this (as if it can bearly stand to sit still on the page). An experience that begs telling, as Andrew suggests... fervent telling, even.
Yep.... I'd love to hear this. Nicely done, mangos.
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