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how come
Contributed by
vampyrekiss
on
Tuesday, 23rd October 2007 @ 12:40:21 PM in AEST
Topic:
AngryPoetry
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how come when i say i love u
all u do is roll ur eyes
how come i promise my life to you
and u just say whatever
how come in your eyes
i can never do anything right
how come im always being compared
to your ex
do u do this just to test me
see if i really stick around
what do i have to do
to prove to you
that i care
im sorry for all the stupid ***** i do
im sorry for having fun in my life
sorry i would rather go out wit my friends
then sit around watchin stupid re-runs on TV
***** this ***** im tired of saying sorry
***** u im tired of stressing
to make sure im perfect
***** U
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vampyrekiss
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2007-10-23 12:40:21]
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Re: how come
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by isis1987 on
Tuesday, 23rd October 2007 @ 10:33:09 PM AEST
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| wow great read. i liked it, i kinda felt like i was intruding on something that wasnt my business. lol. very personal poem. |
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Re: how come
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by deadheadpoet on
Thursday, 25th October 2007 @ 01:18:11 AM AEST
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If you would have taken the time to write out your words instead of "U" for you, and if you wouldn't have so many words deleted, this may of made more sense. Yes, your anger is very evident...put that anger into something positive and forget the ex. Take care.
Peace,
Laura |
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