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Just Breathe

Contributed by allidoiswrite82 on Tuesday, 23rd October 2007 @ 10:13:11 AM in AEST
Topic: oops

breathe like you just got an A in class

and you have not studied all year, so you don't know how you passed

inhale, exhale, gasp

breathe like its 5pm Friday afternoon

like your 7 yrs old sitting in front of your television watching Saturday cartoons

breathe like a newborn fresh from his mothers womb

breathe, breathe, breathe,

breathe like your favorite team just won the big game

like the girl you've had a crush on actually knows your name

breathe like the guy you've been eying feels the same

like you'll never again feel pain

breathe like the sun just parted the rain

breathe like the whole world has gone crazy

and your the only one left sane

breathe like every other day is a holiday

and the day before that day is pay day

breathe like your son just came home from war

breathe like your kidnapped 12 yr old daughter just came walking through the front door

breathe like you don't know what stress is

breathe like you did when all you wanted was to do what the big kids did

breathe like its the last day of school

like you've worked for 65 yrs and your retiring to your pool

breathe like your family and your word is all you got

like you must hit the bullseye and only have one shot

breathe like you just survived the Holocaust

breathe like the only religion that matters is being a human being

breathe like you would if society followed Dr. King's dream

breathe like its your first time or even your last

Copyright © allidoiswrite82 ... [ 2007-10-23 10:13:11]
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Re: Just Breathe (User Rating: 1 )
by Silent-No-More on Tuesday, 23rd October 2007 @ 03:37:21 PM AEST
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I'd love to hear this. It reminds me of that "Wear Sunscreen" recording from the late 90's (don't know if you'd remember that so that the reference makes any sort of sense, but yeh.. ).

I love the "breath like you did when all you wanted was to do what the big kids did" line. I don't know what it is that makes us start to hesitate, what makes us begin to hold back, to think that half-breathing, half-living is appropriate......... it's madness, really. We ought to celebrate more than we do, appreciate more than we do - live (not merely exist) more than we do.... and yeh --- breathe life in like every breath was our last.

Great message here. I'm glad I stopped by for a read. : )

~Snemmy

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