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My other half

Contributed by anesthetic on Tuesday, 23rd October 2007 @ 09:18:31 AM in AEST
Topic: DarkPoetry

Shadow of me twin
mimic every aspect
the same outside to in
hair organs skin
wispers I hear
and tell to you
they tell me of darkness
sickness and fear
and all this
I tell to you

beauty flowers
love and spring
all of the
happeist things
they wisper to you
and you tell it to me
black tear drops
hands so cold
darkness sickness hate
to me you listen twin

paint you a picture
a picture on yor skin
black for your pain
red for your anger
mix them together
and crimson runs free
down your body
through me
twin i will be yor saviour
but first you must do me a favour

cut away the mask of you
expose me to the world
foolish puppet
believed the lie
I am not your twin
you wanted a friend
and I was there for you
love yourself hate yourself
hope is to late now
I am the servant of sin

yor screams are answered
with panic and fear
your mother sobs
as you slowly slip away
stinging your mutilated body
in cruel irony
her tears of love
kill you all the more painfully
and I am freed
unleashed upon the world once more.

Copyright © anesthetic ... [ 2007-10-23 09:18:31]
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Re: My other half (User Rating: 1 )
by Wachumiri on Thursday, 6th December 2007 @ 08:26:19 AM AEST
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Very interesting... I was hesitant to read it at first, but the further I got, the deeper the writing became.
Well written.
Take care,
David

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