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wasted seeds
Contributed by
lostrelic
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Monday, 22nd October 2007 @ 01:49:28 PM in AEST
Topic:
abstract
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cold rain falls like the venom of jealousy
serpent winds blowing its endless tune
weathered time stops for the beat of lovers hearts
but not anuff time to heal broken wounds
standing in shadows
light bleak and empty
holding my casted feelings i fling words of ill begotten wisdom
bouncing hollow
like empty promises and shallow echoes
my tears staining the sky as i wail my anger
holding ground and waving like a leaf
i call to you oh holder of fate
oh weaver of my past and my future
where do i go from here with shredded skin
and quenched passion
when do all men fall and will we regain our freedom
will we get drunk on fermented tears
or sober from lies and stubborn masks of treason
liquid thoughts threw empty grates
spilling all beauty
like a drowned flower
and wasted seed
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lostrelic
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2007-10-22 13:49:28]
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Re: wasted seeds
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by deadheadpoet on
Monday, 22nd October 2007 @ 01:59:35 PM AEST
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Exquisite writing. I read you and I am always left with such a feeling....you are raw and upfront. You seem to hold nothing, and everything inside. I felt a bit of melancholy reading this. The ending lines where very grabbing. Thanks for sharing, my friend.
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Re: wasted seeds
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by law_glen18 on
Saturday, 10th November 2007 @ 06:48:38 PM AEST
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The words of a talented and unique author shine through. Like your art!!!
All the best wishes... |
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