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I Desire You, I Desire Love
Contributed by
Cupid
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Monday, 22nd October 2007 @ 03:56:46 AM in AEST
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I desire you, my love
You are like no other man
That I have known
Though I only know you in my dreams
Perhaps, someday, we will meet face-to-face
For I desire your love.
I desire you
And all that you hold dear
For you are the one I want
You are the one I need
You are the one I desire
And I desire your love.
I desire you, my love
But not just in the way of lust
For frantic lust usually gives way
To easy sweet desire
It's hard to tell the difference sometimes
But when you desire love, as do I,
You know to separate the two.
I desire your love, the way I desire you:
Insanely.
I desire you
For you are my all, my everything
My one only
My sentences are cliché, I know
But it's the way that I feel, my love
For I desire you
I desire love.
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Cupid
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Re: I Desire You, I Desire Love
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by Nabahood23 on
Tuesday, 23rd October 2007 @ 11:50:46 AM AEST
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One Standing ovation!
You will see this comment only if I really liked the poem I have read.
Dear Cupid,
Please excuse my loud excited declaration,
Nevertheless, MY GOD, you are good.
God placed upon your mind, his inspiration,
You wrote them down as best, as you could.
You delivered the words of your poem with so much passion,
God painted you a picture so vividly clear.
His love and his joy just flows from your imagination.
Your words often express the things I hope to hear.
Please continue your words to write.
Faithfully, listen to everything that God has to say.
Think over every word until they come out right.
Your words just might brighten up someone’s day.
Two standing ovations
With the words, you say, some might not quite agree.
However, the words you say are your story to tell.
Only you can tell your story the way that it ought to be.
The way you tell your story is what makes it sell.
Three Standing ovations for Mr. Robert
Three applause for the thoughts, you express.
That story will be placed among the very best.
You really wrote that story quite vividly.
The paradoxical killer for all to see.
I really enjoyed the words I read.
Damn, I wish I penned them, instead.
Copyright 2007
Reginald Levi Walker
This is a review to the wonderful entertaining poem I just read.
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Re: I Desire You, I Desire Love
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by Saloni on
Wednesday, 24th October 2007 @ 10:21:49 AM AEST
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wowwwwwwww! what a lovely undescribable poem! with so much feelings emotions and passion.. you will meet him one day.. you will be loved and he will too.. hope he comes in your life soon may you be happy and blessed
thanks for the lovely comment
lots of hugs and kisses
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