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''No One Noticed''

Contributed by 13ARTEMIS on Wednesday, 5th March 2003 @ 07:30:00 AM in AEST
Topic: Suicide



She walks down the hallway,
no one notices she's there.

She thinks about her life,
as she sits there.

Wonders why she seems so different from all the rest.

A young boy sits behind her,
He taunts and teases her

She sits and thinks about why she feels this pain,
While that young boy will feel no pain or regret.

She runs out of the room,
tears stream down her face, her heart is broken and will never be replaced

No one noticed that she left,
No noticed that she was gone not even Jane.

Jane sits in her desk ever so attentivley,
a girl sitting beside jane makes a cruel remark.

Jane laughs along,
She just wants to have freinds.

The young girl runs to her lockaer,
Grabs her bags and books

She slowly walks to the window outside of her class

She see's jane smiling and laughing,
Making new freinds

not even noticing she isn't there,
a tear of pain and hurt role's down her delecate cheek.

She runs out the front doors, and heads for her house.

The next day that young girl,
She just wasn't there.

Everyone was crying tears of regret,
Even the young boy who treated her so cruelly

They wish they could say sorry,
They wished that they were nicer to her.

maybe even showed her a little more kindess,
acknowledged her every once in a while.

Well you see what happened is that night before,
The young girl to a gun and locked her door.

A shot was fired, everyone heard
Her parents rushed upstairs

They couldn't get in, they knew something happened so they broke down the door

They called 9-11,
But they were to late, the young girl just didn't make it that faithful day.

That night they prayed" Dear god protect her and keep her safe, let her know she is loved and missed by everyone below, and that we will love her till the end of our lives."

And that is exactly what they did........




Copyright © 13ARTEMIS ... [ 2003-03-05 07:30:00]
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Re: ''No One Noticed'' (User Rating: 1 )
by ichiban_girl on Wednesday, 5th March 2003 @ 11:09:02 PM AEST
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really intense. I loved it.!! Keep them coming!


Re: ''No One Noticed'' (User Rating: 1 )
by LOWMAN613 on Wednesday, 5th March 2003 @ 11:24:06 PM AEST
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WOW How sad this was, How horrible to go through! Christina


Re: ''No One Noticed'' (User Rating: 1 )
by sidneyconrad23 on Tuesday, 9th November 2010 @ 05:23:46 AM AEST
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Wow great write keep pushing that pen nice really nice.




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