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the unborn
Contributed by
Jan_Oskar_Hansen
on
Wednesday, 5th March 2003 @ 10:40:00 PM in AEST
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Unborn.
Siamese twins they are the two old oaks
got the same fungi on one spotted trunk,
too late now for a tree surgeon to come
along with his chain saw. Their leaves
are evenly green, sisterly sharing earths
sustenance, when one of them feels low
the other shakes its leaves in sympathy.
In the merciless battle for survival I was
a pre natal bully sucked up my brother’s
nourishment, stillborn he was, yet he’s
the best in me and he sees the beauty of
the sunset and love all helpless creatures
great or small.
Copyright ©
Jan_Oskar_Hansen
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2003-03-05 22:40:00]
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Re: the unborn
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by Former_Member on
Friday, 14th May 2004 @ 07:46:41 PM AEST
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Two words: Eye-opening. I'm glad I clicked my way here, Jan. Your work is by far the most refreshing thing I've stumbled across all month.
Great poem.
5 stars.
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Re: the unborn
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by Former_Member on
Sunday, 23rd December 2007 @ 03:09:51 PM AEST
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yes, i agree -
definitely refreshing.
oh this is beautiful
the metaphor, and simply your style is just amazing.
i might have to read this a few more times
your are truly just... the best.
- Bethani - |
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