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Something's Coming
Contributed by
unknown_utopia
on
Saturday, 20th October 2007 @ 04:17:51 PM in AEST
Topic:
LovePoetry
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Something is coming
loves liquid
is dripping,
fantastic falls of love
crescendo
sensually caressing
and the mist
slowly
and sweetly embraces me.
This is oh so Intoxicating
unknown love melts
deep
into my mind,
I can feel it
something is coming
and it is oh so.......
Copyright ©
unknown_utopia
... [
2007-10-20 16:17:51]
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Re: Something's Coming
(User Rating: 1 )
by Former_Member on
Sunday, 21st October 2007 @ 10:01:09 AM AEST
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| This is creative, mysterious, and beautiful. It is written like a passing thought and leaves the ending up to the reader. Very nice. |
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Re: Something's Coming
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by Former_Member on
Sunday, 28th October 2007 @ 12:32:46 PM AEST
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oh
my
god!!!
DAMN! this is brilliantly written and it is something that touches
this reader deeply. This is so tantalizing but with just enough
mystery to entice your readers ... I love a good mystery.
Believe me when I say, "I wish I had written this!"
Exceptional, poet!
~Breezy |
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Re: Something's Coming
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by emystar on
Sunday, 4th November 2007 @ 02:06:10 PM AEST
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Did you say you was thinkin 'bout me when you wrote It?
Very beautifull.
It makes me have that weird feelin in my tummy.
mucho luv, big huggs, smiles,
emy |
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