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The Cure For My Sickness
Contributed by
OneLastTime
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Friday, 19th October 2007 @ 11:04:12 PM in AEST
Topic:
EmotionalPoetry
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In fear of the future-
I dwell,
Living in this world-
Or is this Hell?
This sickness is killing me,
It has already taken my heart,
It has already taken my soul.
I fear I'm losing control.
My heart is aching,
My hands are shaking.
I'm calling for you,
Hoping you'd make it stop,
Hoping you'd take me in,
Hoping you'd make my troubles be unseen.
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2007-10-19 23:04:12]
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Re: The Cure For My Sickness
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by Cupid on
Saturday, 20th October 2007 @ 05:57:01 AM AEST
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Oh, there are sooo many times when I've felt this way. But things get better again after a bit.
I've written so many poems like this during my Depression times and it always gets better.
There are lows and highs, my friend. And they alternate. If we didn't have sadness or other 'down' emotions, would we really know what happiness was?
Anyway, great poem! Keep on writing! |
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Re: The Cure For My Sickness
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by PhantomVampyress on
Saturday, 20th October 2007 @ 06:38:20 AM AEST
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this is very intense and you can feel the emptiness and want of belonging in this.. a very well worded and expressed piece of work here.. awesome job
rock on,
vampyress Jenni |
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Re: The Cure For My Sickness
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by blackrose233 on
Saturday, 27th October 2007 @ 02:11:45 PM AEST
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| I really like this poem its inspirational, and I love the emotion projected |
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