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Where heavans may be(dreaming)
Contributed by
zenith66
on
Wednesday, 17th October 2007 @ 03:22:40 PM in AEST
Topic:
fantasy
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Past nebulous blankets of drizzly mist,
Reflecting the rainbows that ever persist
Between haunted valleys that endlessly fall-relentlessly creep,
Into leviathan woods where its eidolon sleeps,
Down shadowy woods on the crag where he sleeps,
Gargantuan lakes of archaic resplendence,
Converge at the tower of inspiring ascendance -exceeding the eye,
Its silvery body out climbing the sky,
I’m treading with caution alongside its lake,
Unworthy footsteps retreat in my wake,
As the towers penumbra looks gigantically down,-endlessly stares,
Over the wood and the creek and its unsullied air,
Where each mountain ascends to the sky like a stair…
Where the gods of this place lay golden in light,
Passively watching this dreamers delight...
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2007-10-17 15:22:40]
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Re: Where heavans may be(dreaming)
(User Rating: 1 )
by Former_Member on
Monday, 29th October 2007 @ 02:31:50 AM AEST
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Zenith, my gosh! I'm sorry I have only come to this now, but
what a read for a lazy Sunday morning! I felt like I was casually
walking along the softness of a cloud, viewing the scape of a
true dreamers mist. You captured such a vivid wonderland in
this.
A delightful read. Your descriptions and word usage soar beyond
all expectation! Great post. =)
~Breezy |
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Re: Where heavans may be(dreaming)
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by SilverRain on
Saturday, 10th May 2008 @ 08:04:40 PM AEST
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| I got lost in your words and drifted along with the lines. Love your work! |
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