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Unobtainable Grace
Contributed by
Fragmented
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Monday, 15th October 2007 @ 02:31:53 PM in AEST
Topic:
oops
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Through seaweed netted water
she swims blindly;
Going on a vicious date.
She quickly spears
the trusting angelfish.
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2007-10-15 14:31:53] (Date/Time posted on
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Re: Unobtainable Grace
(User Rating: 1 ) by Loyalist on
Monday, 15th October 2007 @ 04:16:02 PM AEST (User
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I really like it, but would like to see it in a less "fragmented" form. heh! |
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