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HEAR ME
Contributed by
jojo89
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Sunday, 14th October 2007 @ 03:42:33 AM in AEST
Topic:
EmotionalPoetry
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I KNOW YOU DONT WANT TO LISTEN
OR HEAR ME SCREAM AND CRY
BUT IF YOU CANT HELP ME LIVE
CAN YOU HELP ME DIE????
I DONT KNOW WHAT TO DO
IM FEELING TO MUCH PAIN
IM BREAKING DOWN TO QUICKLY
I'LL NEVER BE THE SAME
THEY SAY YOUR THERE
SO WHY CANT YOU HELP ME
DO I HAVE TO SCREAM MY PRAYERS
AND GET DOWN ON MY KNEES
QUESTION ARE YOU THERE
NOW IM BLEEDING FROM MY WRIST
I KNOW THAT YOUR NOT BLIND
SO WHY DO YOU SEE THIS
OF COURSE YOU DONT SEE IT
NO ONE WILL EVER KNOW
ONLY I CAN FEEL IT
BECAUSE IT NEVER SHOWS
Copyright ©
jojo89
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2007-10-14 03:42:33]
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Re: HEAR ME
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by -Nik-91- on
Sunday, 14th October 2007 @ 07:58:18 PM AEST
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| I love this poem i wished once to die and i have come close to killing möyself but i didnt and im glad i didnt just cause one guy hurt me cause now i have found a new one to love |
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Re: HEAR ME
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by Wachumiri on
Thursday, 6th December 2007 @ 08:16:12 AM AEST
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If I'm right, this is to God. At first the caps kinda bothered me, but it does go with the words, making it a visual scream for help, as well as a internal one expressed through words.
Well written, I hope you find peace.
Take care,
David |
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