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To Bid You Farewell
Contributed by
Opium
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Wednesday, 5th March 2003 @ 08:00:00 PM in AEST
Topic:
Grief
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On the river bed she laid
Her eyes gazing the sky
Where her soul has strayed
Then whispered her last sigh
The water gently wiped her tears
And gave her cheeks another kiss
Still the crimson clouds she peers
Lest she might lose that final bliss
Kneeling beside her was I
Softly rubbing her hair
With my palm resting on her thigh
I mourned in misery and despair
In darker ruby the water was dyed
Painting her life with the colors of hell
Where my dearest wife has died
And with a kiss I bid her farewell
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Re: To Bid You Farewell
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by Valerie_Pearson on
Wednesday, 5th March 2003 @ 09:18:27 PM AEST
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| sad but beautifully written, thanks for sharing this one |
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Re: To Bid You Farewell
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by Rakerman1999 on
Thursday, 6th March 2003 @ 09:14:10 AM AEST
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Such a heart breaker my friend.....Very well done as always. :o)
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Re: To Bid You Farewell
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by LadyDama on
Saturday, 8th March 2003 @ 06:30:18 AM AEST
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| oh my... this is gut wrenching and tragically beautiful all in the same breath... oh, this one really got to me... excellent poem... blessings... |
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Re: To Bid You Farewell
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by bobotheclown on
Wednesday, 12th March 2003 @ 03:34:38 PM AEST
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Very beautiful but sad nonetheless I enjoyed the imagery thnx for posting.
Bobo (Joel) |
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Re: To Bid You Farewell
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by gina on
Friday, 21st March 2003 @ 10:14:40 AM AEST
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wlk chou 2ostak enta wel dead wives!
tsk tsk tsk,u poor thing! |
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