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My World
Contributed by
-Nik-91-
on
Friday, 12th October 2007 @ 09:04:14 PM in AEST
Topic:
LostLove
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Last night i dreamt
That i was in your arms again
It seems like just yesterday
That you held me tight & kissed me
My world was bright
Everyday & even night
Suddenly my world is hit
It's gone all dark
I'm trying to find you, but i can't
All i can see is darkness
Where is that light, which you had
That light has gone
Does that mean you have too?
İ remember you saying
YOU LOVED ME
Was that true?
How could some one so perfect
Hurt me so bad?
I never made you my everything
So how did it happen
My world is dark
All because i fell inlove with you!
Copyright ©
-Nik-91-
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2007-10-12 21:04:14]
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Re: My World
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by wizard on
Friday, 12th October 2007 @ 10:43:43 PM AEST
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very nice!
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Re: My World
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by Saruchan on
Sunday, 14th October 2007 @ 11:28:53 AM AEST
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| well i have been there before....and maybe some people really are bad. but also some things are not right to be. sometimes people say things they really do think that they mean, but later find out they were wrong about their own feelings....so dont let yourself be bitter. good write. healthy to get these feelings into a bit of words. |
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Re: My World
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by law_glen18 on
Monday, 29th October 2007 @ 08:10:18 AM AEST
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| Been there, currently driving the proverbial car in that general direction. This emotion backed poem encapsulates the questioning grief felt just after a breakup. I applaud the authors wit with the brilliant way she has given a flow to such a piece. Very good! |
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