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Halcyonic Cynosure
Contributed by
Nazmythian
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Thursday, 11th October 2007 @ 02:01:10 PM in AEST
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Gentle Guidance
The beauty of these words is, there are actually three poems here... the left side can be read alone, as well as the right... or you can alternate sides, and read it all as one.
My apologies, Dear Rrrrrocksie, for the length of time this sat...
waiting for me to find the appropriate presentation of this piece.
My thanks as well, for your willingness to lend me your pen and creativity.
'Tis truly a treat to pen with you.
Nazmythian ~
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Nazmythian
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Re: Halcyonic Cynosure
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by emystar on
Thursday, 11th October 2007 @ 02:32:19 PM AEST
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No doubt, this is Halmark quality.
Incredible work to gethere.
huggs, smiles,
emy |
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Re: Halcyonic Cynosure
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by deadheadpoet on
Thursday, 11th October 2007 @ 10:08:58 PM AEST
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Wow, you two. I'm so flippin jealous. This was beautifully formatted. I love the picture at the end, it made the words you've penned that much more intimate in feel. The write itself was so well put together. I read it thinking how these words were just reaching out to me, how they were talking to me. I love that feel from a piece of poetry. Stunning write. Thank you so much for sharing.
Much peace, love and hugs,
Laura
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Re: Halcyonic Cynosure
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by Former_Member on
Sunday, 14th October 2007 @ 01:03:48 AM AEST
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As I said to you last week, dear scott .. no need for apologies. We both
have responsibilities that keep us from doing the things we love best, no?
And as I said, also, the picture you chose is perfect. And absolutely so!
It fits the words themselves so well. And damn! I love that you drew
attention to how it could be read as two separate poems or together
as one ... kinda like how people stand on their own, but together too.
Nice touch
As always, it was wonderful to work with you again. You inspire great things.
*hugs*
~Breezy |
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