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BROKEN MASK
Contributed by
drkness_awts_as_lvrs_hate
on
Wednesday, 10th October 2007 @ 11:45:53 AM in AEST
Topic:
EmotionalPoetry
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I GO INSANE
MASK COMPROMISED
LOOK AWAY
DON'T FEEL MY THOUGHTS
I HIDE BEHIND
WHAT'S LOST INSIDE
DARKNESS HIDES
BEHIND MY EYES
MASK NOW BROKEN
FOR THE WORLD TO SEE
SHATTERED DREAMS
BACK TO HAUNT
INSIDE MY HEAD
MIND COMPRESSED
EXPANDING NOW
AND TEARS FLOW EASY
Copyright ©
drkness_awts_as_lvrs_hate
... [
2007-10-10 11:45:53]
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Re: BROKEN MASK
(User Rating: 1 )
by thebrokenyouth on
Wednesday, 10th October 2007 @ 11:55:23 AM AEST
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i really like this...
theres no rhyme scheme but it flows well
it tells a hidden story
good work
great words
keep writing
~remy
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Re: BROKEN MASK
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by jackson21 on
Wednesday, 10th October 2007 @ 05:24:31 PM AEST
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| i like this, many of people have feelings similar to this its just they dont usually like to say them out loud. I think you just managed to do it all for them, and no less than beautifully might i add. great write, keep it up, Jack! |
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