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Understanding
Contributed by
brew
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Monday, 8th October 2007 @ 12:36:48 PM in AEST
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Why does life pass some by
I mean; not in reality but with hopes
Faith
Love
Happiness
And more
Seems they try... But why is it them
Do they not try hard , enough
Is it a bigger and greater test.?
I relise we have those, and some more
But can not some just let slide...?
I want happiness
Hope
Faith
and so much more for them....
So answer my asking...
Help.. the few who deserve this
And so much more
I know its more of a inner prayer for those who do really try and it hits them wrong way or time
Copyright ©
brew
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2007-10-08 12:36:48]
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Re: Understanding
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by PhantomVampyress on
Wednesday, 10th October 2007 @ 06:49:38 AM AEST
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wow this is a great thoughtful poem.. it makes you think alot.. very powerful.. great job on this ..
rock on,
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Re: Understanding
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by Former_Member on
Wednesday, 10th October 2007 @ 03:29:24 PM AEST
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Wonderful and touching poem dana, loved every word of it, most meaningful . . .
((((brew))))
Ben
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Re: Understanding
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by deadheadpoet on
Wednesday, 10th October 2007 @ 10:11:01 PM AEST
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Brew,
This was a very thoughtful write, my sister. Beautiful that you would think of others this way. I oft wonder why crappy things happen to good folks...I've come to the conclusion that some of us must have been pretty naughty in our previous lives and Karma is coming back to get us in this one...just a thought. I know I've had more than a few boogerish things happen and I feel like by now...Karma ought to be catching up by now. Hee Hee
Thanks for sharing.
Much peace,
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Re: Understanding
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by Former_Member on
Sunday, 14th October 2007 @ 01:20:09 AM AEST
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Some are born to a raw deal,others create their own misfortune,some are merely victims to fate.
An altruistic poem,brew,generous in its thoughts,
Den |
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Re: Understanding
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by Wachumiri on
Wednesday, 12th December 2007 @ 12:33:40 PM AEST
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This is a really nice prayer, almost, pleading. Very honest, eloquent.
Take care,
David |
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Re: Understanding
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by JamesStockdale on
Friday, 4th September 2020 @ 10:38:28 PM AEST
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| So kind ....Lovely... |
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