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Contributed by trini on Sunday, 7th October 2007 @ 02:22:35 AM in AEST
Topic: FamilyPoems

You are my tears
My pain
My scars
My hate

The acid
Slowly creeping from my stomach
My own personal gag reflex
The vomit

The callus over my heart
The three legged chair
The spiders in my pillow
The glass in my knees

You are my tears
My pain
My scars
My hate

You are my father

Copyright © trini ... [ 2007-10-07 02:22:35]
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Re: You Are... (User Rating: 1 )
by Former_Member on Sunday, 7th October 2007 @ 03:20:00 PM AEST
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*gasp*

wow .. I was completely caught off guard with your ending.
I am in awe .. and a deep, (DEEP) understanding of this. It is
so amazingly poetic, and painfully real.

Damn. I am relating so much to this, that it is hard to remain
objective, I'm afraid. BUT, it's fine writing when one can extract
emotion and disturbance from another. You've certainly
done that. And done it well!!

Great post!

~Breezy

Re: You Are... (User Rating: 1 )
by CrystalWinters on Sunday, 7th October 2007 @ 09:02:58 PM AEST
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I was very moved by this, everyday I'm torn between this and love for my dad it's hard to love when they've caused so much pain that are like scars that never leave. I thought you did an excellent job with this

Re: You Are... (User Rating: 1 )
by Mama508 on Thursday, 25th October 2007 @ 07:26:44 AM AEST
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I know exactly how you feel...

I hope that if/when you have your own children you teach them about the beauty and love in life...

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