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I Wait
Contributed by
honey56
on
Saturday, 6th October 2007 @ 07:29:07 AM in AEST
Topic:
oops
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The space seem to encircle me
As I wait, wait..
My heart rapidly beat while
I stand in the darkness as it
S lowly surround me..
I wait, wait for the beckoning
Light...
My heart beat even faster as I
Wait!
Not knowing why am here in
This hour of darkness..
But yet, I wait, wait..
Maybe this dream will prove to
Benefit me in some manner as
I wade through darkness wanting
Some light..
I wait, wait.
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honey56
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2007-10-06 07:29:07]
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Re: I Wait
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by Shmokin on
Saturday, 6th October 2007 @ 07:33:20 AM AEST
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| Speaks well of frustration, nice peice (perhaps you should have waited a ickle bit longer and checked it before posting - missing a couple of s's) not a critisim,, just advice, i've done it myself then kicked myself afterwards too :-) |
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Re: I Wait
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by funnyface09 on
Sunday, 7th October 2007 @ 04:32:50 AM AEST
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nice write...
i hate and love waiting...
thanks for sharing..:) |
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