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Escape
Contributed by
Sandwolf7
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Saturday, 6th October 2007 @ 06:45:27 AM in AEST
Topic:
AmericanTragedy
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My Prison
My Haven
My Santuary of Hope
My Kingdom
My Corner
My Room
My home
Were I live, I think, I breath in air
Were I wait in my corner calling someone near
For here I wait
And sulk in the pain
Waiting for the day
When fate will take me away
Copyright ©
Sandwolf7
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2007-10-06 06:45:27]
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Re: Escape
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by Shmokin on
Saturday, 6th October 2007 @ 07:36:53 AM AEST
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| Nice expression of the dicotomy of the agorophobic within us all :-) |
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Re: Escape
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by Jackee_line on
Saturday, 6th October 2007 @ 09:04:50 PM AEST
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| Great poem, great picture, they go so well together. Well done |
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Re: Escape
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by Former_Member on
Sunday, 7th October 2007 @ 02:29:32 PM AEST
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A fateful end is not always an escape, methinks.
Still, this opens up so many notions and ponderings. It's interesting,
the words you chose to throw together. Prison and haven ...
kingdom and corner .... room and home ... but all in all,
a "Sanctuary of Hope wow. Now that IS intriguing ...
Love your take on this angle. Painfully thought-provoking.
~Breezy |
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Re: Escape
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by redsleeve on
Monday, 6th October 2008 @ 03:35:28 AM AEST
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great combination of picture and poem.
makes me wonder if you drew this picture for this poem or did you write this poem about this picture?
either way great job!
thanks for sharing
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