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Sing Me A Lullaby (of razorblades and knives)
Contributed by
droughp
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Thursday, 4th October 2007 @ 11:27:58 AM in AEST
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Razorblade lullabies
So short and sweet,
Drift me into-
an un-wakened sleep
Let the knife slip-
and slide on my skin
"Goodbye my love-
Goodbye my friend."
Meh, not my best, but wever, it's impulsive
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droughp
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2007-10-04 11:27:58]
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Re: Sing Me A Lullaby (of razorblades and knives)
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by lost_chadow on
Friday, 5th October 2007 @ 06:38:53 AM AEST
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| And we love impulses...:) |
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Re: Sing Me A Lullaby (of razorblades and knives)
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by Adreana on
Friday, 5th October 2007 @ 07:28:15 AM AEST
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how creepy!! kinda gave me chills. may not be your best, but it's a good one! Way to go, Yo!
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Re: Sing Me A Lullaby (of razorblades and knives)
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by Adreana on
Friday, 5th October 2007 @ 07:28:24 AM AEST
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how creepy!! kinda gave me chills. may not be your best, but it's a good one! Way to go, Yo!
~Adreana |
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Re: Sing Me A Lullaby (of razorblades and knives)
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by brew on
Friday, 5th October 2007 @ 11:51:43 AM AEST
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Its something like out of a horror movie, but maybe its something you are not liking. Very dark and deep.
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Re: Sing Me A Lullaby (of razorblades and knives)
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by Nazmythian on
Friday, 5th October 2007 @ 03:48:36 PM AEST
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I'm not a big fan of suicide and cutting poems ... the fact that you put it to such a recognizable tune assisted (me), made it easier to interpret what you might be hearing. Some manage to write this form and style well ... I am not one of them.
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