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Blown Away
Contributed by
deadheadpoet
on
Wednesday, 3rd October 2007 @ 04:33:42 AM in AEST
Topic:
anguished
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Being fed upon
by maggots of self-destruction.
Eating at what was left
of a woman, so scorned.
Hot metal rods
thin and cruel
pierce my temples.
Excruciating pain befalls me.
The grip that I so
frailly have on this
reality called life,
slips more each long day.
Left alone within.
Hopelessness abounds.
Eyes have been clouded
over with Cataractous lies.
Pieces of me scattered,
hacked away at the core.
Nothing left to sweep up, I was
blown away when you opened that door...
9/30/07
Laura Howell Horner
Copyright ©
deadheadpoet
... [
2007-10-03 04:33:42]
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Re: Blown Away
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by PhantomVampyress on
Wednesday, 3rd October 2007 @ 06:37:52 AM AEST
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whoa!! such intensity and power in this.. this poem does exactly what the title says.. it blows you away.. with the heart felt expression.. beautiful job here
rock on,
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Re: Blown Away
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by Rhei76 on
Wednesday, 3rd October 2007 @ 06:55:14 AM AEST
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| Great writes, kinda go with how I've been feeling lately. I enjoyed them |
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Re: Blown Away
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by Former_Member on
Friday, 5th October 2007 @ 04:53:23 AM AEST
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Dang! There's a lotta pain in this piece 'n' 'ppears ya've captured it well. It ain't contagious, though, so go out 'n' share some peace 'n' happiness 'n' git a bunch of it back. You're a winner. Know that fer a fact! Nice capture with masterful use o' words. Makes it purty darn powerful.
wabl
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