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Unknown Feelings himher
Contributed by
isis1987
on
Tuesday, 2nd October 2007 @ 05:51:04 PM in AEST
Topic:
anguished
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she's hung up on...
his using...
she still thinks she has a chance with...
his leading her on.
she's waiting to be with...
he doesn't know the pain his causing...
she lost her pride to...
his breaking her heart.
she cant say no to....
he 'thinks' his just having fun with...
she's blind to trust...
he can't keep his hands off her.
she's building up the courage to say goodbye to...
he doesn't know his loosing...
she's saying goodbye to...
his in love with her.
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isis1987
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2007-10-02 17:51:04]
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Re: Unknown Feelings himher
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by PhantomVampyress on
Wednesday, 3rd October 2007 @ 06:41:25 AM AEST
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a very interesting write on this subject. its well expressed.. I like how you made it different.. awesome job
rock on,
vampyress Jenni |
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Re: Unknown Feelings himher
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by droughp on
Thursday, 4th October 2007 @ 01:43:23 PM AEST
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| I love it and the way you turned it around at the end |
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