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Goodbye my dear...
Contributed by
madhusudan
on
Sunday, 30th September 2007 @ 10:27:57 PM in AEST
Topic:
EmotionalPoetry
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Goodbye my dear...
As your palm slipped from mine;
and you looked back as you walked away, it hurt,
cause;
the pain has drained my life away
Goodbye my dear...
I may forget but never forgive what happened;
for every explanation just seems so futile;
cause;
i lost you while trying to win you...
Goodbye my dear...
I care not what life holds for me;
and I never want to see or know what you do...
cause;
To see you is to still love you...
Goodbye my dear...
There are things I will miss;
My eyes will never get to see what they long to see;
My lips will never get to taste what they long to taste;
cause;
You are gone now...way too far...
Goodbye my dear...
All said and done, I never got a final kiss...
Thats why this is not the end, there is some story left..
cause
one last kiss could just get it back again.
Goodbye my dear...
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2007-09-30 22:27:57]
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Re: Goodbye my dear...
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by Lay-Dee on
Monday, 1st October 2007 @ 01:33:27 AM AEST
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Hey.. I like your poem, It also reminds me of what I'm going through at the moment.. especially the "i lost you while trying to win you..." part.. if you need to talk, add or pm me :) ..
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Re: Goodbye my dear...
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by emystar on
Monday, 1st October 2007 @ 12:38:08 PM AEST
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Very sad but awesome writing.
huggs,
emy |
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