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Never take words, for granted
Contributed by
brew
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Sunday, 30th September 2007 @ 12:49:50 PM in AEST
Topic:
oops
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From beginning to end
The one who does that and more
Jumbles you
Confuses you
And...More
Have you been that way
Do you want to be that way
Its strange, yet a happiness deep within
They can make you laugh
Cry
Jump
And sigh
They sing to you (even if they cant)
They read to you
They even say so much more its hurts
Hurts in a good way tho, yet wanting more
SO im guessing its being "in love"
And becoming more
Take what you think and dont use for granted
Lifes too short
Copyright ©
brew
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2007-09-30 12:49:50]
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Re: Never take words, for granted
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by madhusudan on
Sunday, 30th September 2007 @ 10:35:28 PM AEST
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| felt this was a little incomplete nad yet it still captures what it sets out for...take things as they come...nice... |
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Re: Never take words, for granted
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by emystar on
Monday, 1st October 2007 @ 04:18:31 PM AEST
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Nice work and so true.
Great job.
big huggs,
emy |
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Re: Never take words, for granted
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by Former_Member on
Wednesday, 3rd October 2007 @ 11:34:00 AM AEST
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Beautiful in such a way as to insinuate a hidden wisdom bey ond it's years, quite
uncanny to say the least, quite beautiful
to say the most . . .
pops lol.
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