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solo flight
Contributed by
sunflower
on
Wednesday, 5th March 2003 @ 09:30:00 AM in AEST
Topic:
SadPoetry
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I sat on weathered rocks,
yelling in the dark
spitting into the wind,
tossing sins of shame,
sitting silent in a forest scene,
becoming one with trees
breathing in , breathing out,
rolled in mud, sank in sand,
chanted motionless at the sun,
bled life on typed pages of white,
took a needle or two underskin
now decorated in eternal memory,
swam to seclusion
sheltered safely
on my throne of rock,
walking this midnight walk,
the moon at my shoulder
my shadow beneath,
this truth for the moment,
clear in sight,
born alone,die alone,
this is sadly,
but poignantly,
just our own
solo flight
Copyright ©
sunflower
... [
2003-03-05 09:30:00]
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Re: solo flight
(User Rating: 1 )
by Former_Member on
Wednesday, 5th March 2003 @ 10:15:51 AM AEST
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| Very well written & enjoyable to read although sad. |
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Re: solo flight
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by LOWMAN613 on
Wednesday, 5th March 2003 @ 11:31:34 AM AEST
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| Well done on this,those moonlit walks sound nice! Christina |
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Re: solo flight
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by M on
Wednesday, 5th March 2003 @ 11:31:35 AM AEST
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| I agree, it is very well written, and very true. this is a very good poem |
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