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STILL WATER
Contributed by
searchingmyself
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Friday, 28th September 2007 @ 10:30:15 PM in AEST
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STILL WATER
I can feel my pulse racing, it's that time again I know
there's a traffic jam in my mind, seeking serenity, to let it all go
that vast open space, where the seagulls fly freely
to dive down, to unearth it, to see it all clearly
cause in our everdays we tend to lose our own truth
the motor just keeps racing as we long for our youth
So, take me back to the still water
my sanctuary, my home, where im free
I look as the sun glistens down on the ocean
there it is, my reflection, where I always find me
there it is, my reflection, where I always find me
the breeze is my angel as she lifts the weight from my shoulders
I soak in the sun as it soothes my own soul
the ocean's my music and the sky is my vision
this place, it is mine, where I come to feel whole
feel the sand through my toes
taste the margaritas on my lips
be thankful for all life bestows
when the sea gets excited and the whitecaps ride in
hear the rythm of the steel drums and the voice from within
So, take me back to the still water
my sanctuary, my home, where im free
I look as the sun glistens down on the ocean
there it is, my reflection, where I always find me
there it is, my reflection, where I always find me
It will always be here in this still water
where im human, im real and just me
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Re: STILL WATER
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by Adreana on
Saturday, 29th September 2007 @ 12:09:39 AM AEST
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| I can TOTALLY hear this as a song! Rhythmical and descriptive... it emotes. WAY TO GO! :) |
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Re: STILL WATER
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by Former_Member on
Saturday, 29th September 2007 @ 01:42:12 AM AEST
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that would make a good song. somebody like jimmy buffett could sing it, or maybe not. i liked it. i wonder how you sing it... it would be cool to hear how you do it.
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Re: STILL WATER
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by Puppy_dog_eyes on
Saturday, 29th September 2007 @ 04:29:01 AM AEST
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I can see this as an accoustic piece, simple guitar and vocal.
Takes me back to when I was young and still wrote songs !!
Steve |
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Re: STILL WATER
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by brew on
Saturday, 29th September 2007 @ 01:13:45 PM AEST
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yes, and good title......its like a song you would hear from a slow, yet up beat tune,,,,,, thanks for sharing
brew~ |
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Re: STILL WATER
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by unknown_utopia on
Saturday, 29th September 2007 @ 09:57:28 PM AEST
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very good
still waters run deep |
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Re: STILL WATER
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by TheUpsidedownThinker on
Tuesday, 18th May 2010 @ 04:12:55 AM AEST
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| I love the flow of this song. I also can see it as some sort of slow based song. Something that you would kick back and relax to. |
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