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Roller Coaster.
Contributed by
midnight_writer
on
Wednesday, 26th September 2007 @ 08:53:02 AM in AEST
Topic:
EmotionalPoetry
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back, we go again.
forth, we go tomorrow.
up! and down, we go.
first spitting venom -
now remedies...
pick.
one.
no, i don't wanna be angry all the time.
but i can't keep doing this...
constant changing; motion sickness
and as hard as i fight it -
there's the smallest fraction of me,
that has this weakness; fear of heights
ihatethis!
not knowing, how i feel.
not being totally in control of myself.
!
i'm trying so hard, to get what i want.
and i don't even know what's at the top,
of that steep, slippery slope.
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midnight_writer
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2007-09-26 08:53:02]
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Re: Roller Coaster.
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by endlesspath on
Wednesday, 26th September 2007 @ 11:27:37 AM AEST
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then drop
maybe the bottom isn"t , what YOU think
this was an topsy, turby write. good analogy on what can happen, but look forth to falling and seeing, more
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Re: Roller Coaster.
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by TeamJK on
Wednesday, 26th September 2007 @ 12:40:50 PM AEST
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I've been on a roller coaster ride before..and it did feel like this..
Well done.
JK2
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