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confused
Contributed by
nikkie
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Wednesday, 5th March 2003 @ 05:00:00 AM in AEST
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“Confused”
So confused in my own words,
So confused in yours too
I don’t understand any of it,
I don’t believe it’s true.
Why did it happen this way?
We could have solved it all,
but ever since it was over
everything came to a fall.
Being friends would be cool,
Having you to hold would be great
but that isn’t going to happen
for it was my heart you had to break.
I want to go crazy
But I know it’s not right
I just want to hear your voice
or for you to be in my sight.
I try to talk to you
but you don’t care to listen
I don’t understand you
Why won’t you just listen?
I don’t understand
Why do you have to be an ass?
it’s so crazy
but it’s all in the past.
I wish I could tell you how I feel
But you don’t care to listen to me
you don’t care at all anymore
so I guess this is how it has to be.
I have to tell you goodbye
I have to leave you be,
but always remember
you’ll always be loved by me.
Copyright ©
nikkie
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2003-03-05 05:00:00]
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Re: confused
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by Former_Member on
Wednesday, 5th March 2003 @ 08:35:43 AM AEST
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| Very sweet poem. I like the way it all comes together. |
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Re: confused
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by ladyfawn on
Wednesday, 5th March 2003 @ 12:43:36 PM AEST
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| awww, sad, but well done poem, hope your feeling better, and again, big welcome to the site, huggs always nessa |
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Re: confused
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by Former_Member on
Friday, 7th March 2003 @ 11:36:11 AM AEST
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| nikkie, i know this one... and it's good ... don't stop writing sis. |
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Re: confused
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by Former_Member on
Friday, 18th April 2003 @ 08:38:19 PM AEST
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| Why be confused if "He" won't listen? Let him be, as you said. He'll realize , on day, he's made a big mistake by not listening to you. He'll regret it all, but you shouldn't. You've done your best...... (Luh ya NiNik lol) |
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Re: confused
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by AngryPrincess on
Sunday, 11th May 2003 @ 06:45:24 PM AEST
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very good poem Nikkie
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