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Our Weekend
Contributed by
Unaekseveer1
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Wednesday, 5th March 2003 @ 04:30:00 AM in AEST
Topic:
LoveRemembered
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Never shall I forget
That Friday evening
Walking into my local pub
My eyes suddenly fixated
Oh my God!
The exact embodiment
Of all my lifelong dreams
My idea of perfection!
In love I plummeted
With you my Josephine
My Delilah
My Cleopatara
My lively Carmen
My love.
In a flash we were walking
Together side by side
I told you there
Anything I would do for you!
Thinking maybe foolish
Was I too sudden, too early?
But that Monday Afternoon
You walked out through those doors
And standing before me
You put my mind so at ease
Like nobody else had or will.
Then I knew for definite
Forever it would be You!
Not since has another
Made it past my eyes!
All I see is your image
My ears hear only your voice
My nose longs for your hair
My hands have each other
But feel so alone.
Where are you now my Love?
Where?
Copyright ©
Unaekseveer1
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2003-03-05 04:30:00]
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Re: Our Weekend
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by Jenni_Kalicharan on
Wednesday, 5th March 2003 @ 06:36:13 AM AEST
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Nice write, Dean.. Hope you find her...
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Re: Our Weekend
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by LOWMAN613 on
Wednesday, 5th March 2003 @ 11:36:24 AM AEST
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| Good one Dean,one day she will be at your finger tips! Christina |
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Re: Our Weekend
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by ShadowsCloud on
Wednesday, 5th March 2003 @ 10:12:43 PM AEST
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Dean, this one is very beautiful. I am sure that one day you will find her. Or possibly some one else. I really enjoyed this one, it is great.
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Re: Our Weekend
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by mckayla on
Thursday, 6th March 2003 @ 06:52:40 PM AEST
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Beuatiful write! I hope you see her again
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Re: Our Weekend
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by karoody on
Friday, 14th March 2003 @ 10:12:48 AM AEST
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| very sweet. i hope you find your love. |
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Re: Our Weekend
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by wolfflow on
Sunday, 16th March 2003 @ 06:13:07 AM AEST
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| if it were only that easy but it never feckin is |
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