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Me and My god
Contributed by
Anu
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Saturday, 22nd September 2007 @ 06:45:49 PM in AEST
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In a day I get to know who's my friend and who's not;
Who's real, fake or likes passing taunts..
I give them a smile, make my life worthwhile,
At the end of the day, its just me and my god.
I have so much to share so much to speak..
There's lava inside me ready to leak..
But I find it hard to trust you all..
At the end of the day, its just me and my god.
I cry to him,speak to him,love & respect him above all
And is bestowed by him, with my problems resolved..
I am never lonely neither scared..
He would make my future glorified with my name on the top..
At the end of the day, it will be just me and my GOD..!!
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Re: Me and My god
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by lukiest1 on
Sunday, 23rd September 2007 @ 02:30:32 AM AEST
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| ya, as a devout muslim i kno how u feel. dis vry awesum |
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Re: Me and My god
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by Former_Member on
Thursday, 27th September 2007 @ 02:05:04 PM AEST
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A most beautiful peice of writting,
as fragile as a water lilly, and as
honest as a morning sunrise. In
these lovely words your heart has
has found it's true home.
thank you also for your read
and most gracious comment.
Ben
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Re: Me and My god
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by phaNeo on
Sunday, 17th August 2008 @ 01:08:51 AM AEST
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| old saying "jiska koi nai hota, uska bhagwan hota hai" (dubbed those who have none always hav god by their side) in such a masterpiece. also shows hw a lonely/outcast person feels thruout his/her loneliness n luk up to the creator when no1 else turns up to offer the shoulder to lean upon n cry or even share a smile.beautifully written |
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