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Her heart is dying.
Contributed by
OneLastTime
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Saturday, 22nd September 2007 @ 02:40:23 AM in AEST
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Can't change you,
She couldn't make you become someone you're not.
Can't change the way she feels,
The heart you broke , just won't heal.
Too stubborn to care,
He was never there for her.
He broke her heart.
Now he stabs it again, rips it apart.
Laughs while it bleeds.
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Re: Her heart is dying.
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by Former_Member on
Saturday, 22nd September 2007 @ 05:12:42 AM AEST
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A very painful and telling verse.
Full of truths and strong feelings. |
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Re: Her heart is dying.
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by TeamJK on
Saturday, 22nd September 2007 @ 12:09:05 PM AEST
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Quite painful to read, but nicely done.
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Re: Her heart is dying.
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by Former_Member on
Saturday, 22nd September 2007 @ 01:52:25 PM AEST
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Ouch...I felt my hear wrench at last line...
"Laughs while it bleeds"
That deserves hell...
~Ravyn~ |
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