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one morning sunrise
Contributed by
ladyfawn
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Wednesday, 5th March 2003 @ 12:40:00 AM in AEST
Topic:
PoemsonBeauty
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now first light of day
the sun comes up slowly, far high in the sky
the mountain speaks softly and tells me why,
this sky streaked with pinks and blues in haste
for this colour inspires life, gives a lovely taste,
with thoughts of my life touching endless time
clever nature brings words to me, and rhymes,
as one only needs to be open to see and hear it
i see this beauty and simply want to share it,
it is so brilliant up here in the morning mountains
the gentle breezes blow freely and never complain,
as the sun comes further in, and the mists take flight
full morning explodes and away goes the night,
and the sky changes to brighter and deeper shades
the blue beauty takes any pain away, it begins to fade,
so massive and wonderfully extreme is nature
and these morning sunrises will always endure,
the sun full up lovely, far high in the sky, whereas
the mountain still speaks softly, time at an impasse,
now full bright the day
~*~
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ladyfawn
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2003-03-05 00:40:00]
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Re: one morning sunrise
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by venkat on
Wednesday, 5th March 2003 @ 01:57:48 AM AEST
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| It is like a bright and beautiful painting. soo sweet and beautiful writing... venkat |
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Re: one morning sunrise
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by DreamWeaver on
Wednesday, 5th March 2003 @ 02:51:20 AM AEST
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| I've said it before - you are so lucky to live where you live .. I envy you your beautiful mountain ... lovely poem Nessa. |
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Re: one morning sunrise
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by LOWMAN613 on
Wednesday, 5th March 2003 @ 11:40:25 AM AEST
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| What a beautiful picture you have painted with your words! I loved this! Christina |
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Re: one morning sunrise
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by wolfflow on
Wednesday, 5th March 2003 @ 02:04:41 PM AEST
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| this is gorgeous |
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Re: one morning sunrise
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by bobotheclown on
Tuesday, 11th March 2003 @ 08:32:47 PM AEST
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ah, some excellent imagery Vanessa your poems are always beautiful though. So the genre Poems on Beauty is kind of redundant (I think thats the right word) anways great poem!
Your friend,
Joel |
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Re: one morning sunrise
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by The_Phantom on
Wednesday, 12th March 2003 @ 04:47:02 AM AEST
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In this maze of beauity in witch you write, I'm lost in this place, thanks for shareing this lovely write, I'm at a lost of words.
The Phantom |
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Re: one morning sunrise
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by Feelin_Like_A_SadFellow on
Monday, 17th March 2003 @ 05:47:17 PM AEST
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| i can see what you're talking about ... thank you for sharing such beauty |
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Re: one morning sunrise
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by banjo on
Thursday, 27th March 2003 @ 03:24:47 PM AEST
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| I love the beginning and ending line. The middle lacks focus. Sharpen! |
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