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tired
Contributed by
socialmisfit
on
Friday, 21st September 2007 @ 06:09:36 PM in AEST
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tired
weary soul
weighted in my chest
anemic and frowning like kahlo
as monet beauty
bleeds to mundane
my smile a watercolor in the rain
it is tragedy become familiar
broken in the most beautiful disguise
bleak
bereft ghostly
fractal muted kaleidoscope eyes
silent as television sets in windows
hollow tunnels drowning disjointed dreams
bleeding blackwater sorrow
emotionless refulgent cinema repetition
somber, lifeless, suicide stare
wet with dew and memories
broken
beaten lifeless
mute braille screams
puppet strung, crucifixion chained body
amnesia survival, paled perfection
inanimate plodding mannequin motion
surreal tragedy still life circus
iron lung tumor nicotine slave
indifferent object battered by life
my soul
my mind
my body
tired, bleak, broken
age faded innocence
endurance wearing down
warranty expired fleshmobile
rest is unknown, eternity is a lifetime
heaven is found in sleep
hell in the rising sun
i find myself trapped in the drudgery of success
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2007-09-21 18:09:36]
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Re: tired
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by Former_Member on
Saturday, 22nd September 2007 @ 05:19:00 AM AEST
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| An apt title for this piece. You have really brought forth the feelings of waeriness and mundane. I mean this in a good way. I can see it was intentional and done well! |
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Re: tired
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by emystar on
Saturday, 22nd September 2007 @ 04:28:01 PM AEST
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For someone that considers them self as a socialmisfit you are a great writer.
good work.
huggs,
emy |
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Re: tired
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by Shade on
Sunday, 3rd February 2008 @ 09:13:57 PM AEST
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| Your poetry is brilliant. |
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