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Clouds
Contributed by
deadheadpoet
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Friday, 21st September 2007 @ 12:01:39 PM in AEST
Topic:
Haiku
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Clouds float high above
Capturing my attention
Lost in magic skies
Colored clouds roiling
Seas of frozen particles
Ocean above me
Clouds seem to beckon
My brown orbs watching their shapes
Dance across the sky
Laura Howell Horner
9-20-07
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Re: Clouds
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by broken_cookie on
Friday, 21st September 2007 @ 01:18:46 PM AEST
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| you cudnt have captured them any better! |
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Re: Clouds
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by Former_Member on
Friday, 21st September 2007 @ 01:46:42 PM AEST
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Gee laura this so beautiful and so peaceful to read and look at, what a sence of relief i
got reading this, beautiful as ever my sister.
((((peace 2u serenity of thoes cloud))))
Ben
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Re: Clouds
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by shelby on
Friday, 21st September 2007 @ 02:21:21 PM AEST
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I swear sis we are living on the same corner of the world lately...... I love this, so serene.
Nice poem to end the day........
If I dont talk to you before you go have a blast!!
Loves ya
Michelle |
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Re: Clouds
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by Former_Member on
Saturday, 22nd September 2007 @ 03:33:40 AM AEST
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'Pears t' me there's no better place t' have yer head, Laura, 'specially when ya capture the moment with such grace 'n' whim! Fantastic 'n' enjoyable read.
wabl
KenMoore
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Re: Clouds
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by Former_Member on
Saturday, 22nd September 2007 @ 04:31:14 AM AEST
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wow, lovely haikus'
Great pictures too!
(I'm partial to the center one.) |
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Re: Clouds
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by TeamJK on
Saturday, 22nd September 2007 @ 12:44:53 PM AEST
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Beautifully presented, DHPoet.
Enjoyed this.
JK2 |
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Re: Clouds
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by drkness_awts_as_lvrs_hate on
Saturday, 22nd September 2007 @ 04:11:50 PM AEST
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| nothing wrong with your head in the clouds we all do it great write |
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Re: Clouds
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by Former_Member on
Monday, 24th September 2007 @ 12:27:54 AM AEST
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nice place for a head to be, sis. wow. This is stunning. The words,
the pics, the thoughts .. so dreamy and peaceful.
I miss you hun. :( Life is such a nuisance sometimes .. always
getting in the way of living. lol
Sunday mornings are glorious, are they not? Hope all is well .. send
a pm my way will ya? *hugs you tight*
~MG |
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Re: Clouds
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by Dom on
Monday, 24th September 2007 @ 10:24:56 PM AEST
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Its so nice to get lost up there though, isn't it? So damn relaxing and inspiring to watch the atmospheric world dancing and swirling above us.
Beautiful words hun, and I love the images, particularly that second one of the pier that seems to stretch on forever into the distance.
Take care,
Dom |
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Re: Clouds
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by endlesspath on
Wednesday, 26th September 2007 @ 12:12:13 PM AEST
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the heads in the clouds as long as the others are with all
lovely posts of words, and pics
i want clouds and heads...lol
give me some.or lend me some
endless |
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