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Blood Lust
Contributed by
Wilder
on
Wednesday, 5th March 2003 @ 12:20:00 AM in AEST
Topic:
DarkPoetry
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I see her standing, most fair and tall
Her pale neck, so open and fresh
A smile embeds upon my face
I move forward, embracing the call
"My dear," said I, though she gasped
She saw my fangs and mournful grin
And so she ran; she ran all night
The prey, the kill, I did not grasp
The dawn, she glowed! I must away
Hunger boiled inside my heart
I had not bit a soul that night
I left for bed, and down I lay
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2003-03-05 00:20:00]
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Re: Blood Lust
(User Rating: 1 )
by Chaos666 on
Wednesday, 5th March 2003 @ 07:29:38 PM AEST
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| Interesting take on Dracula's life..... maybe that did happen once or twice...... |
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Re: Blood Lust
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by Percursors on
Wednesday, 5th March 2003 @ 07:53:34 PM AEST
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| Good so so so so good...i loved it... |
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Re: Blood Lust
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by bobotheclown on
Tuesday, 11th March 2003 @ 08:25:33 PM AEST
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'mournful grin' great imagery there. Very good rather simple poem.
Bobo (Joel) |
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Re: Blood Lust
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by wazarov on
Sunday, 23rd March 2003 @ 10:31:53 PM AEST
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| i can tell you have a vampiric blood in your veins..beautiful imagery of your dreams.. |
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