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A mornings word 091807
Contributed by
wordsy
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Wednesday, 19th September 2007 @ 01:58:54 AM in AEST
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True to my understanding,
where once the doubt did stir.
My words were not remanding
nor responses did they deter.
Naught to their own meaning
on occasion it does occur.
That left to their own deeming
I think they would concur.
That reasons not withstanding
or the excuses they incur,
are found a bit demanding
to the thoughts that they refer.
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wordsy
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2007-09-19 01:58:54]
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Re: A mornings word 091807
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by purplestary on
Wednesday, 19th September 2007 @ 05:58:36 AM AEST
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| brilliant words as always..don't understand it all but it sure sounds good. lol..nice rhyme scheme and everything..it flows nicely..good job. |
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Re: A mornings word 091807
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by Dom on
Tuesday, 25th September 2007 @ 09:35:50 PM AEST
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Nice use of the ABAB rhyme scheme throughout, the repetition of sounds induces the reader to read faster, making the whole piece feel as if it is quickly pacing along.
Good work,
Dom |
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