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Rain rain go away...
Contributed by
madhusudan
on
Tuesday, 18th September 2007 @ 10:23:13 PM in AEST
Topic:
EmotionalPoetry
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In the night;
with the candle still burning bright;
I lay all alone, with no one else in sight...
With the rains still pouring hard;
It felt as though the whole world was crying for me.
You were gone...but how I wish I could be with you now;
Can someone help me reach you? I just don't know how...
In the day, thinking of you makes me weep;
while the nights have just stolen my sleep!
And while you said goodbye and took your final breath;
It was me...who died a silent death...
And as the one tear fell of me;
It blew off the mystic shapes of the candle flame.
I don't have anythin else to say...
Rain rain go away...
Rain rain go away.
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madhusudan
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2007-09-18 22:23:13] (Date/Time posted on
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Re: Rain rain go away...
(User Rating: 1 ) by broken_cookie on
Wednesday, 19th September 2007 @ 05:19:44 AM AEST (User
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youve captured exactly how i feel towards two situations, i really love this one. i hope to read more great poems from you! |
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