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The Temptation
Contributed by
ediii
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Tuesday, 18th September 2007 @ 07:22:31 PM in AEST
Topic:
drugabuse
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Tick after Tock
the sword chops up the little worms
of resentment
planted in the soil of ideas
so wild
I am afraid to water the buds
to make them flourish.
Still, the golden canikin is resting in my palm
so small it fits around my finger,
a ring signifying a vow to the loved one.
Tick after Tock
I await the flowers to come up
to warm
the soul-sick liquid in the canikin
when the soil of ideas
so wild
I am afraid to water the buds
to make them flourish.
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ediii
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2007-09-18 19:22:31]
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Re: The Temptation
(User Rating: 1 )
by mylady on
Wednesday, 19th September 2007 @ 04:11:46 AM AEST
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some time flower don't come at all go head
water it .. nice poem |
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Re: The Temptation
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by purplestary on
Wednesday, 19th September 2007 @ 06:15:42 AM AEST
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| or sometimes you just have to let the flowers come...i agree...water them...beautiful work. |
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