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Flames of Despair
Contributed by
purplestary
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Tuesday, 18th September 2007 @ 12:23:31 PM in AEST
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Permanantly branded to the point of constant bleeding.
There are no bandages big enough to cover up these scars.
Burning and bleeding, from the inside out.
Flames of anger and despair radiate through these hazel eyes.
As every minute passes, i''m becoming more aware.
noone is around, there is noone to my resuce
It''s never like the movies, I never get a "break through"
No super-heros either, to drown these burning flames.
I must suffer through alone, since noone would understand,
I''m suffocating, lack of oxygen, my lips are turning blue,
But i''ve got nobody to save me.
Nobody understands what it is like to feel branded
from the inside out. Burned by a flame with no name.
Pain is hard enough, but how do you ask for help
with something you just can''t explain?
I guess i''ll just keep crying these tears at night
in hopes that if enough are shed
I can drown this flame.
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Re: Flames of Despair
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by shelby on
Tuesday, 18th September 2007 @ 12:45:02 PM AEST
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This is strong, I felt you throughout this write.
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Re: Flames of Despair
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by Former_Member on
Thursday, 4th October 2007 @ 12:59:48 PM AEST
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amidst the pain of love you have managed to
once again pen a peice of beautiful writting
not that there's anything beautiful about pain and yet your inner heart remains hopeful.
Ben
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Re: Flames of Despair
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by Former_Member on
Thursday, 29th November 2007 @ 05:37:20 PM AEST
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"Pain is hard enough, but how do you ask for help with something you just can''t explain?"
What a compelling line . . .
Love the tittle, love the poem and i must say
i was realy moved by this writting.You realy
know how to touch one's emotions, lovely
indeed . . .
Ben
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Re: Flames of Despair
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by emystar on
Monday, 4th February 2008 @ 08:51:10 PM AEST
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Incredile write!
I could feel the flames.
Tears wanter the flowers.
Awesome, dynamic write.
big huggs, luv, peace,
emy |
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